Tired of vague feedback? I’m here to bring clarity from across the shelf.
Request a Read →I’m Fanna—a craft-forward reader and reviewer passionate about storytelling. For over seven years I’ve been helping writers understand exactly what they’re doing best, what has potential but needs work, and what might be pulling the story down.
Polishing a manuscript takes more than line edits and structural revision. It takes knowing what your reader actually felt. That’s what I’m here for!
Fanna is an absolute gem in the world of advanced reading!
Michelle Arpin Begina
You’ve finished your manuscript. But you still don’t know if it’s working.
You’ve finished writing a story (congrats, that’s the first step!) You’ve also revised it. Got all sorts of constructive comments from your critique partners and writing buddies. Friends and family love it!
But you still don’t know whether your target reader would keep turning the pages. That uncertainty is expensive—in time, in confidence, and in the risk of sending your work out before it’s ready.
Three ways to get
the feedback you need.
Detailed In-Line Comments
Real-time reactions added directly to your manuscript as I read—capturing exactly where I slowed down, where I was confused, where I was surprised, and simply where I liked or didn’t like something.
Answers to Your Questions
Up to ten specific questions answered with honesty and depth. You direct my eye—from overall pacing to a scene you’re uncertain about, or a character whose arc feels unresolved. The feedback goes exactly where you most need it.
Comprehensive Reader Report
A structured, in-depth analysis written after a complete read-through. Covers pacing, plot, character development, world-building, stakes, and the overall reader experience.
Get All Three—The Complete Picture
The most thorough way to understand your manuscript before you send it anywhere. You get inline comments, a comprehensive reader report, and detailed answers to your ten most pressing questions—all in one. Every read includes genre-specific insight and a clear sense of where your manuscript stands right now, through a reader’s viewpoint.
or $99 for 50K
A beta reader who reads your genre.
A beta reader who actively reads and loves your genre brings the exact expectations, instincts, and pattern recognition your target reader has. All demographics—YA, new adult, adult, and short stories as well as novellas. Completed works only.
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I keep my queue small on purpose.
Every manuscript I take on gets my complete, undivided attention. That means I limit how many I accept at any given time—which is why booking in advance is essential.
Turnaround is 2–3 weeks from start date, with updates throughout. If you're working toward a deadline, reach out and I'll do my best to accommodate.
📅 Now Booking: April–June 2026“She immerses herself into the work as well, wondering what will happen next, commenting on character personalities, and overall putting great efforts into showing the real reader experience.”
Vinnie Grewal—Author of The Final Catharsis
“If you’re looking for a beta reader who pays attention to detail and cares about your work, I’d recommend you book a spot with Fanna!”
F.M. Aden—Author of The Bride of Death
Is your manuscript ready for a beta read?
Not every manuscript benefits from a beta read at the same stage. Answer seven quick questions and find out exactly where yours stands—plus get a free resource to help you get the most out of any beta read.
Reserve your spot now.
Fill out the form and I'll review your details and reach out within two business days with a confirmation email, an invoice, a payment link, and a Statement of Work including an NDA.
Once payment is confirmed, I'll send a short questionnaire to understand your goals, your audience, and your specific concerns—so my feedback serves with specificity.
— Booking April–June 2026 · Spots are limited and go fast —
REQUEST A READ →No AI. No outsourcing. As an experienced professional and a writer myself, I understand the value of confidentiality—your manuscript is safe with me.